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Post by Franny on Aug 26, 2008 23:24:04 GMT -5
ummm.... a female wouldn't have already impressed to a brown... she could have impressed to a green though (our Pern is just becoming diferent  ) I don't have much time so I will look over more later.... |
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Post by Franny on Sept 21, 2008 15:15:25 GMT -5
Many more turns later, she was transferred into Allride Weyr where she was met with many more looks of disapproval. She didn’t care too much about it. She chose a rather comfortable weyr and pretty much away from some of the others whers. She much liked her privacy, and so did Woeith.
She wouldn't have transfered, she would have applied to be allowed to go live and work land in the western continent (where would she have transfered from..?)
She doesn't live in a wher... she lives in a weyr
Beyond that he tends to talk and talk and talk… never truly knowing when to stop, yet when he thinks that he has collected enough ‘data’ would he then stop talking all together and comptemplate the things that he had learned at that time.
(he?) this is a female green dragon, not a male dragon...
other than that good
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) I don't have much time so I will look over more later.... 
