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Post by obsidian on Oct 23, 2008 10:49:49 GMT -5
Name: Vrake (After Impression - V'ke) Age: 18 Gender: Male Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual Rank: Candidate Family: Father - R'an of Brown Dimoth [dead] Mother - Ebya of Green Sanith [dead] Older brother - J'da of Brown Nicoth - twin to Rinna - [alive] Older sister - Rinna of Green Carith - twin to Jeda - [alive] Younger brother - Luca [alive]
Pet Name: Click Speices: Firelizard Color: Bronze - Click is the color or rust with a shine to him that gives him a murky redish/brown color under certain lights. Personality: Click has the attention span of nothing. One second he's sitting on Vrake's shoulder, the next he's on the ground pouncing on a bug that happened to travel in Vrake's path. He is however, slightly scarred for life due to when he was just starting to get use to living with Vrake, Vrake's younger brother, Luca, tried to pick him up and hurt him. Now he doesn't let anyone walk up behind him and pick him up without causing serious damage. Shiny things amuse him. Other: He earned his name when Vrake first Impressed the little flitt. When Vrake had tried to go get more food for the flitts, the little bronze made a clicking noise before going between and then reappearing on his shoulder. Thus the name.
Pet Name: Moss Speices: Firelizard Color: Green - Moss is a beautiful emarald color with light speckles of green along her tail, underbelly, neck, and around her eyes. Personality: More laid back and calm than Click, Moss would have to be the voice of reasoning with the two males, though more often ignored when she images something bad will happen. Docile little Moss has a bit of a temper when Click disobeys and gets distracted and will actually put the bronze flitt in his place, but as soon as the mood is pass, she will flee to Vrake's arms and seek forgiveness for her actions. Other: Moss earned her name when she laid on a patch of moss near the beach where she was found and almost blended in perfectly, minus the speckles of light green along her body.
Physical Appearance: Vrake stands about 6 foot even and weighs around 186 pounds of hard muscle. Due to being the baby of the family for awhile, he has learned to stay strong and fit for anything could happen, and he has done just that over the years. His body is hardened from years of working alongside servants and drudges. His hair is short in the back, but the bangs have started to block his vision, so more often than not, he is walking around blind. The color of his hair is dark, possibly being black or drak brown, but its hard to tell when he never sits still. His most interesting feature are his eyes, which could almost be called dark red, but in truth they are just really light brown and flash in certain lights to look darker.
Personality: At one point in time, Vrake had been an out of control little boy that was by no means a 'civil' being. He ran wild and even in his current turns, he still opts for a pair of wher-hide boots and pants to the stiff uniforms of the Candidates, so most take him for a servant or lower. He's proud of his family line and will fight any who says otherwise. In no way, shape, or form will he stand for anyone talking down on his family's line. Caring and kind, Vrake has always been the boy who brought treats and things to people who needed them, but as he grew this tendanacy has sort of died. He's not as welling to help random strangers, but that doesn't mean he won't have Click or Moss do it, making it seem that the firelizard's have a mind of their own, when really he stills cares about all people.
History: Born to s family where all were of Weyr blood, Vrake and his other siblings were expected to follow in their mother's, Ebya of Green Sanith, and and father's, R'an of Brown Dimoth, footsteps. Granted, Vrake's mother wasn't the Weyrwoman, she was lucky that her Green Sanith continued to Rise even after two out of the three remaining Golds didn't. She was also luckily in the sense that the same Brown caught her Gold everytime. It was very rare, but after the second time, Ebya questioned her dragon about it and only received the answer that Dimoth was a very special Brown. It was storming the night Vrake was born and as he took his first breath, he was surrounded by his two older siblings, Jeda and Kathrina, along with his mother and father and the woman who was suppose to have been his foster mother. After one look at his curly black, baby hair and strange yet beautiful light brown eyes, Vrake's mother had been unable to give him up, thus he stayed with his family. Growing up with two slightly older siblings, meant Vrake was the baby of the family . . . For a couple of years. During which time, he seemed to get a nack for causing trouble and starting fights between the older siblings, most that normally ended with one of them sent to bed without supper and he getting a big piece of something sweet. This went on for about two months, before R'an caught on to what his youngest son was doing and punished him by taking his reward of sweets away. This was both a good and bad thing; good because it meant Vrake would grow up with better health than his sweet-addicted siblings and bad because it meant he lost his sweet tooth over time. When Vrake was ten turns old, his mother's Gold Rose and his father's Brown followed her to the sky. He watched in awe as several other dragon's gave chase, but his father's Brown stayed right with his mother's Gold. The end result, Brown Dimoth caught his mate and his father got ahold of his mother. Within nine months, there was a screaming baby boy nestled to Ebya's bossom. Jeda and Kathrina went to the Hatching as Candidates and Vrake watched as his brother Impressed a Brown and his sister a Green. He remembers the event with both sadness and happiness, as it was the last time that his older siblings would feel like playing with him, while he was happy cause they had finally found their calling. R'an reminded Vrake that it was simply their time to grow up and his would come soon. Turns passed and news of three Rider's moving away and possibly creating a new Weyr filtered through the weyr hold. R'an stood proud as he sent his son off to Allride Weyr, hoping that Vrake would continue the tradition of Dragonriders in the family. Two days before the leaving, Vrake stumbled across a wild firelizard clutch that had been destroyed. He was lucky to find two eggs still intact and surprised when they hatched. He fed the little Green and slightly bigger Bronze flitts what little food he had on him and promised them more if they wait in their little nest. As he stood to walk away, the Bronze made a clicking noise and went between giving Vrake a bit of a fright, but quickly reappeared at his shoulder. The little Green attached herself to Vrake's pants leg, thus beginning a beautiful friendship. The morning of his departure, Vrake went to kiss his mother goodbye, but found that she and R'an lay cold in their beds. Time had not been kind to the two old Riders and in the dead of night, their dragons slipped between, taking their elderly Riders with them, in their sleep. Luckily, Luca had already been living with a foster mother in the community weyr hold, so when the time came, Vrake simply gave away what was left and left for Allride Weyr with the intent at Standing at the next Hatching. But turns have passed and Vrake will soon turn nineteen and his time to Impress is ticking by faster than he would like.
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What they hope to impress: Any color besides Blue Read: Yes Write: He does, but he doesn't like to Figure numbers: Somewhat. Family For Impression: Entire family minus Luca
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Post by Franny on Oct 23, 2008 23:13:17 GMT -5
We only had 3 golds when Kelyna impressed Malaracyth, so if you want the mother to be gold she would have had to have died before that occurrence... He could have lived at a community weyr hold (where candidates stay) until then or he could have just stayed at the community weyr hold that his mother had been a part of. Same for Luca because I hate to tell you but we don't have a Black Obsidian Weyr here. also, his mother would have been part of the High Council... and you can't mention his mother and father as "two of the proudest Rider's most Weyr's have known" because we don't mention anything of them in our history... I don't mind if you include them, as long as they are sort of minor... and remember, his family is in the 900 years after thread stage... they wouldn't have thought thread would return for a long while... we just now reached 1001 years since last pass... Other than that he looks ok... fix that and then shadowreine also needs to approve it...
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Post by obsidian on Oct 24, 2008 7:34:03 GMT -5
Changed. I'm sorry about the Black Obsidian Weyr part. Vrake is one of my charaters on the other site and I thought I had altered his profile, but it looks like I had missed one. [/blockquote]
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